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Old 10-25-2006, 01:21 PM
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article on the Richmond Zombie walk in the VCU news
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THE 8th ANNUAL RICHMOND ZOMBIE WALK is on Saturday, October 27th 2012

Go to RichmondZombieWalk.com for all the gory details
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Old 10-26-2006, 02:57 AM
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nice read :twisted:
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Old 10-26-2006, 08:57 PM
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I debate word choice (the bold emphasis is from me):

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Six rogue mummies appeared from behind a corner and came quickly toward us. The groups clashed! The mummies rushed our line as we tore through their group, yet they escaped without harm.
"Quickly" should be "lethargicly", and "rushed" ought to be "stumbled awkwardly through". Aside from that, the article rocks.
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