COMMONWEALTH TIMES ARTICLE

[deadmason]

article on the Richmond Zombie walk in the VCU news (http://www.commonwealthtimes.com/home/index.cfm?event=displayArticle&uStory_id=13f013fd-3498-4a7f-88af-cf4372d38e93)

[killer]

nice read :twisted:

[spudawg]

I debate word choice (the bold emphasis is from me):

Six rogue mummies appeared from behind a corner and came quickly toward us. The groups clashed! The mummies rushed our line as we tore through their group, yet they escaped without harm.

"Quickly" should be "lethargicly", and "rushed" ought to be "stumbled awkwardly through". Aside from that, the article rocks.